5 Sentence Writing Challenge

Every week at school Room 17 does this challenge called the 5 Sentence Challenge where you have to write 5 interesting sentences about a picture.  If you finish you could be voted online for the best 5 sentence challenge.  While I'm away I'm still going to be joining my class in this challenge:  

Here is the picture from this week:

... And here is my writing....

"I was standing in the middle of a big, crowded marketplace.  I could barely see a thing.  I was so hot and sweaty that I felt like an ultraly heated pool myself.  Shockwaves of people rushed past me like blasts of water heading for all kinds of different stands!  There were shiny, silver fish, well-tanned, golden cheese and even sticky, tasty sweets."